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The Ascension

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This story is something I've been thinking about for several months. Although there are many female muscle growth stories out there, I wanted to write one of my own with the themes I love that are usually not featured in this kind of stories. 

These themes are:
- First-person narration by the growing girl (why don't we use it more? It's much more effective and captivating);
- FMG+GTSG, both extreme;
- The growing girl is a mom, and her daughter is the one triggering her growth;
- Ghastly level of vascularity and breasts that turn into muscles (much like Tigersan's Tiffany Cannonball);
- Nipples becoming comically huge and strong (an Iczerman reminiscence I've never shaken off);
- Breast milk becoming extremely corrosive and destructive (I realize this might not be very popular);
- Ascension to proper godhood (she doesn't become 'a goddess', she becomes God. The only and only. Omnipotent and all-powerful.)

As a non native English speaker, writing a 7500-word story in English has been particularly time consuming, especially because I wanted to do something good and so I checked every sentence and word several times over trying to find the best option.


I'd like to thank the following people, in no particular order:

- :iconup2nogd1: for his incredible short stories originally published on writing.com (where he posted as Lvmsclgrls). I think they're some of the most incredible tales in the FMG genre, so much so that I shamelessly stole a part of one of them ("Picture Perfect") as a basis for this story.

- :iconmagnusmagneto: for his Mother Knows Best story. I'm a sucker for growing Moms, and that story is hands down the best one out there.

- thesabre, a writer of this community, for his story Muscle Sex which probably features the most polished, impressively detailed descriptions of a girl's growing muscles. He's a master of this craft and an inspiration.

- Marknew, a writer of this community, for his FMG novels which in a perfect world would be best-sellers sold in every library. If you have never read his classics, do it now.
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😍 really good !! Great description of her body and growth